Tanka: Time

03 Nov

Tanka: Time

This post is in response to Weekly Haiku Challenge hosted by Ronovan of RonovanWrites. The prompts for this week are Creep and Race. I have written Tanka, an extended form of Haiku.

Watching quietly

I caught new day creeping in

Today waned to past

Future flowering today

An eternal race of time!

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Sandeep Kanabar / 03 Nov 2016

Beautiful!

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- Feelings and Freedom / 03 Nov 2016
  
  Thanks Sandeep !
  
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jacquelineobyikocha / 03 Nov 2016

What a calming Tanka.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 03 Nov 2016
  
  Thanks my dear 🙂
  
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  - jacquelineobyikocha / 04 Nov 2016
    
    My pleasure
    
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega / 04 Nov 2016

Lovely Tanka!

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- Feelings and Freedom / 05 Nov 2016
  
  Thanks 🙂
  
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rosemawrites / 08 Nov 2016

aww. beautiful!

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- Feelings and Freedom / 08 Nov 2016
  
  Thanks dear 🙂
  
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  - rosemawrites / 08 Nov 2016
    
    you’re welcome!
    
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