Tanka: Earth

15 Jan

Tanka: Earth

obscurity looms

as Earth spins on its axis

retracting from Sun

steering us from dawn to dusk

to radiate light elsewhere

Linked to Weekly Tanka Challenge#79 hosted by Elsie of Ramblingsofawriter where the challenge is to use the words “light” and “dark”. I have used “light” and “obscurity.”

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kiwinana / 15 Jan 2018

I love the way you use words, very artistic, thanks for taking part in the weekly prompt, I appreciate it.
It’s always nice seeing you, love the impression on your face, always makes me smile.
Hope you have a pleasant week.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 16 Jan 2018
  
  Thank you so much Elsie for your heart warming words 🙂 I love to participate. I like your prompts. Have a great week ahead.
  
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jacquelineobyikocha / 20 Jan 2018

Nicely captured.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 20 Jan 2018
  
  Thanks Jacqueline!
  
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