06 Dec
An array of thoughts flooded my mind when I cared to ascertain the purpose of my life I crunched some beliefs I munched some feelings focusing on my dreams envisioning my future I dusted off the qualms that rusted my mind I stand liberated!
De hosted Quadrille Monday at dVerse this week. He prompted to us write a quadrille which must include the word crunch or crunched or crunching.
Lovely !!
Thanks Deepika!
Beautiful.. if we can understand our being we are liberated.. though its difficult but not impossible..
It certainly is a great effort and needs lot of introspection but you rightly pointed out, it isn’t impossible 🙂 Thanks for your views!
Awesome Vandana and such deep lines you have written. Great poem.
Thanks a lot Kamal! I am moved by your loving words 🙂
Welcome Vandana always.
stunning – well practical in our daily adventure…
Thanks.
I really enjoyed the nice rhythm….well, do you feel liberated from all these beliefs and emotions..?
Loved that “crunched” and “munched” – such unusual words in this usage, which is liberating in and of itself.
Thanks De. I know, an unusual usage but I hope it fitted in well 🙂
I liked the description of qualms rusting the mind and the crunching of beliefs and munching of feelings.
Thanks Frank. Appreciate it 🙂
Love how you describe liberation.
One must stand liberated
Absolutely!