Poem: Border

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      I am glad you liked it. The prompt just overflowed thoughts in my mind. Thanks 🙂

  • Brilliant… this is what borders is all about… imagined differences… of something that are so much the same.

    • Feelings and Freedom

      Absolutely! They have tremendous power to give colours to that imagination despite the similarities. Thanks for your lovely words.

  • revivedwriter

    I really like this. The repetition is beautiful, and when I read it, I think of all the ways that people different from myself can seem scary, but we are all fundamentally the same. Connection and breaking down socially- or mentally-constructed borders is imperative.

    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thank you so much for your lovely words. The physical borders certainly have the capacity to create mental barriers and block our emotions if we forget that people on the other side are just like us. Thanks for reading!

  • Grace

    Very well done ~ Sometimes the borders are just imaginary and the other side, just looks like us ~ Enjoy your weekend ~

    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks Grace. I got carried away with the prompt 🙂 Have a great weekend to you too !

  • “was it just a culmination of thoughts or

    a manipulation of feelings

    a legacy of hatred ”


    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks Margaret! Doesn’t border evoke all those mysterious thoughts in our mind…Thanks for reading 🙂

  • Pooja

    Great Post I am always grateful to meet people with empowered views and expressing through life creatively.

    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks Pooja. I am glad you liked it. It’s great to meet you too. I’ll visit your blog in a while 🙂

      • Pooja

        same here Good t hear that .. keep writing

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