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  • Oloriel

    Ouch, I feel so bad for Jake! I love how you approached the prompt, and that you shown something that happens very commonly.

    • Feelings and Freedom

      You are right. It’s something that happens quite often so I thought of weaving words around it. Thanks for your lovely comment 🙂

  • erbiage

    this poem is like a sharp knife in a dark drawer. well done!

  • Sangbad

    Well done…a heartfelt story you told…

  • swalia

    Awww…poor Jake!!! Beautifully expressed.

  • Smitha V

    Whoa! A Love triangle. Poor dear Jake. Well Done Vandana!

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