Balance of Nature

15 Mar

sun enlightens day

glitterati of bright stars

recoups verve at night

led by charismatic moon

nature balances life with grace

an inspiration to seek

This is Bussokusekika Poetry – a pattern of 5-7-5-7-7-7. It is a Japanese form of poetry consisting of a Tanka poem with an extra phrase of seven added at the end.

Linked to Weekly poetry challenge #88 hosted by Ramblingsofawriter where Elsie has challenged us to write any form of poetry using words “balance” and “grace”.

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boundlessblessingsblog / 15 Mar 2018

Nature sure balances life and it is so pronounced by your beautiful words, Vandana.

Feelings and Freedom / 16 Mar 2018

Thank you so much Kamal

- boundlessblessingsblog / 16 Mar 2018
  
  Welcome Vandana.

kiwinana / 15 Mar 2018

Beautiful words, nicely written Bussokusekika poem.
Thanks, hope you are having a great week.

DeepikasRamblings / 16 Mar 2018

Good job Vandana !!

Balance of Nature

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