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  • Abha Mondal

    बहुत ही ख़ूबसूरत कविता.

    जैसे हौंसलों का तक़दीर से लड़ना
    जैसे अधूरी दास्ताँ का दोबारा इब्तिदा होना
    जैसे कायनात का हमें मिलाने की साज़िश करना
    जैसे दो रूहों का रस्मों से परे मिलना।

    you are equally good in English and Hindi poetry. Loved your writing style and selection of words to make it a beautiful piece.

  • Janaki

    Happy feel देने वाली कविता। At places it stirred memories, at places it made me feel nostalgic …enjoyed it….writing in Hindi made a huge difference to the feel it gave.

    • Feelings and Freedom

      There are some emotions that get beautifully expressed in Hindi. I’m happy it gave you a happy feel and took you down memory lane. Thanks Janaki ♥️

  • Pooja Priyamvada

    Similes are such an exceptional poetic device and you know how to use it well Vandana

  • Rashi Roy

    Such a beautifully written poem. Loved your choice of words and similes. Enjoyed reading both your English and Hindi poems.

  • Sivaranjini Anandan

    Yadomae chupihuyi kushi dudna…loved the feeling that added the poetic essence and also told the reality.

  • Priyanka Naik

    “जैसे ओस की बूंदों के छूने से फूलों का खिलखिलाना
    जैसे धरती और गगन का क्षितिज पर मिल जाना”

    A beautiful portrayal of a deep emotion called love.

  • Anita

    So well expressed!
    May this “you & me” always party! 🙂

    While reading your poem, I remembered the lines from the Hindi movie song- “Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga” (1942 A Love Story).
    I actually read your poem in that tune 🙂

  • Archana

    Bahut hi sunder kavita, Tum aur main ke rishte ki gehrayion ko bakhubi darshati hui. har ek line ko maine dobara padha, dil khush ho gaya.

  • Imagemakeover

    You have filled so much love into tum and hum that it looks like a unbreakable bond. Thanks for spreading positivity through your poetry. Loved it.

  • romagptasinha

    Such a romantic weave Vandana, I could actually hear a beautiful ghazal as I was reading the same, I am sure some one will acquire rights and record this soon

  • Gowribhargav

    Such beautiful comparisons. So smooth flowing. Your hindi verses are as beautiful as English. Loved it.

  • deepikabhatlisharma

    I totally loved the poem. Such beautiful images you have conjured. Reminded me of the song ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga … I am saving this one

  • jainnehas

    Such a beautiful poem. Bohot hi dino ke baad ek prem bhari pyari kavita padhi. Thanks for writing this.

  • MeenalSonal Mathur

    The poetry is filled with metaphors that every person can relate to and it strikes the chord with every positive soul.

  • Manas Mukul

    Ati Sunder Vandana ji. Hindi aur Angreji dono me ek si nipunta. Is kavita me gajab ke roopak ka prayog kiya hai. It was so lovely to have you as a part of #UMeUBlogHop and witness your wonderful writing.

  • chinmayeecreations

    I had a smile through out reading this poem from you. Such beautiful use of imagery that it transported me to a new world full of love, a pristine one.Loved it.

  • DiaryOfAnInsaneWriter

    Beautifully expressed poem. I am a die-hard romantic and could actually feel each word. Keep writing!

  • Pragnya

    The sweetness of young love is making readers mushy. Beautifully written.

  • Pr@Gun

    बेहद खूबसूरत कविता
    तुम और मैं जैसे एक दुआ, जैसे धरती और गगन का क्षितिज पर मिल जाना
    बहुत ही खूबसूरत शब्दों से सजाई हुयी है ये पंक्तियाँ

  • Mayuri6

    It was such a pleasure reading this. Love how you expressed yourself.

  • Samnolshalini

    बहुत सुंदर! “ दो रूहों का रस्मों के परे मिलना”

    This line is eternal!!! Loved the verse and the devices used to decorate it

  • Leela Satyan

    वाह! यही बात मन से निकली आपकी कविता पढ़ने के उपरांत। वाकई मन मोह लिया आपने अपनी कृति से, वंदना

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