Tanka: Supremacy

15 May

Tanka: Supremacy

sharp rays of the sun

illuminate each planet

hallucinating

planets for billions of years

what a clear supremacy

The tanka incorporates prompt words “clear” (synonym of “clean”) and “sharp” of Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge # 33

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boundlessblessingsblog / 15 May 2017

Great tanka words. Nice.

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Anjana / 15 May 2017

Great !

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- Feelings and Freedom / 16 May 2017
  
  Thanks Anjana!
  
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Colleen Chesebro / 15 May 2017

Nice use of the prompt words. Well done! <3

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- Feelings and Freedom / 16 May 2017
  
  Thanks Colleen!
  
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Akhila / 16 May 2017

Ah.. those rays are fallen in your words vandana

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- Feelings and Freedom / 16 May 2017
  
  Thanks for your lovely words Akhila 🙂
  
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mitadaur / 16 May 2017

Lovely poem.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 16 May 2017
  
  Thanks Raja 🙂
  
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