Tanka: Old Vs. New

11 Apr

Tanka: Old Vs. New

old generation

ardently welcomes new breed

accedes hopefully

a new perspective of life

only to be ostracized

Inspired by the prompt “Old and New” of Weekly Tanka Challenge #39.

This is also my submission towards Day 11 of NaPoWriMo.

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Feelings and Freedom

Comments ( 16 )

Sheetal Bhardwaj / 11 Apr 2017

Harsh reality of this generation. Nicely put through.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 11 Apr 2017
  
  Yes…harsh but reality…I wish this difference could somehow be reduced..Thanks for your comment.
  
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  - Sheetal Bhardwaj / 11 Apr 2017
    
    True that. You are welcome.
    
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yassy / 11 Apr 2017

So much said in do few lines. Very evocative ,Vandana.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 11 Apr 2017
  
  Thanks Yassy
  
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daneelyunus / 11 Apr 2017

nice one

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- Feelings and Freedom / 11 Apr 2017
  
  Thanks
  
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  - daneelyunus / 11 Apr 2017
    
    Welcome mam
    
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Sangbad / 11 Apr 2017

Off prompt…nice one…

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- Feelings and Freedom / 11 Apr 2017
  
  Yup..A little tied up today Thanks
  
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boundlessblessingsblog / 11 Apr 2017

Reality of life and so well written

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- Feelings and Freedom / 11 Apr 2017
  
  Thanks Kamal
  
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  - boundlessblessingsblog / 12 Apr 2017
    
    Welcome
    
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kiwinana / 11 Apr 2017

Nice tanka, thanks for joining in on the fun, I have added your tanka post to this week’s prompt “season 7 easter”. Have a nice day.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 12 Apr 2017
  
  Thanks I enjoyed writing for that prompt.
  
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