Tanka: Night Sky

11 Dec

Tanka: Night Sky

stars gift sight to eyes

night breeze gracefully dances

tickles mind and ears

to rhythm of ocean waves

moon guards as knight of night sky

The post follows the prompt words “Eyes” and “Ears” shared by Elsie of Ramblingsofawriter for her Weekly Tanka Challenge#74 and to Haiku Horizons for the prompt word “ocean” for week 197 (though it’s a tanka and not haiku!)

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Feelings and Freedom

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B. / 11 Dec 2017

Bright and dreamy…

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- Feelings and Freedom / 11 Dec 2017
  
  Thanks B 🙂
  
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  - B. / 11 Dec 2017
    
    Thank you for posting these lovely verses !
    
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yassy / 11 Dec 2017

Nice flow. Enjoyed this one.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 11 Dec 2017
  
  Thanks dear Yassy 🙂
  
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  - yassy / 11 Dec 2017
    
    Welcome my dear.
    
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kiwinana / 11 Dec 2017

Sweet, I love those words, they ring true leaving a peaceful scene. Thanks.
All the best for a peaceful relaxing week.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 12 Dec 2017
  
  Thanks Elsie 🙂
  
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Infinite Living / 11 Dec 2017

So beautiful!

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- Feelings and Freedom / 12 Dec 2017
  
  Thanks Pragalbha!
  
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  - Infinite Living / 12 Dec 2017
    
    You are very welcome!
    
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