Our prompt for the day takes its cue from Notley’s rebelliousness, and asks to write a poem that involves rebellion in some way. The speaker or subject of the poem could defy a rule or stricture that’s been placed on them, or the poem could begin by obeying a rule and then proceed to break it (for example, a poem that starts out in iambic pentameter, and then breaks into sprawling, unmetered lines). Or if you tend to write funny poems, you could rebel against yourself, and write something serious (or vice versa). Whatever approach you take, your poem hopefully will open a path beyond the standard, hum-drum ruts that every poet sometimes falls into.
So I have been in rebellious mode for quite a few days with respect to all the heinous acts happening in our society. It’s been bothering me for sometime and it was a perfect day to vent it out. I actually wrote two poems on the same issue but posting one here.
Poem: Obnoxious men
A child is raped and burnt alive
By strong living beings who call themselves “men”
Insensitive of the age and innocence
All that matters to them is the sex of the child
A shameful act to be condemned for ages
But does our responsibility end just there
Is there nothing we can do to chasten such men
Would we meekly witness such deeds in future
Are such acts a measure of virility of men
Is womanhood merely a pleasure for them
Was a woman created to just satiate man’s wishes
To use and manipulate as men please
Who is at fault when a woman is molested
Whose dignity is lost when a woman is assaulted
Do you assent that such a woman should end her life
Is it really a woman who should cry and hide
What legacy are we going to present to our children
Do such men deserve to be called human
Are such men entitled to absolution
Aren’t they monsters disguised in the soul of human
©Vandana Bhasin
A powerful message!
Thanks dear. I hope it has some impact…
Oh yes!
Things will change when enough people like you speak out. Well done!
It’s the patriarchal culture. It exists everywhere, but it has to change.
True!
Keep speaking up! The story is sickening. I’m so glad so many people speak up against what happened. This SO needs to change.
We need to keep saying it. As long as it takes. (K)
True! I guess that’s the only resort.