This poem has been written following the prompt of Poetry Parlour for Day 2 that requires to start the poem with a “Thank You” and end it with “Sorry”.
I’ve written the below poem as an ode to all those relationships in our lives- parents, siblings, friends, spouse, whom we tend to take for granted.
Poem: Please forgive me
“Thank you,” I wanted to say
When you stopped by to check on me
To ensure that my mind hadn’t taken over my body,
To confirm that my emotions weren’t controlling me
“Thank you” I wanted to say
When you heard my silence
And just pressed my hands
To assure you were there, if I needed to speak
“Thank you,” I wanted to say
When you held my hand and lifted me
Guiding me to the pitfalls at the crossroads
Watching me as I treaded one of those
“Thank you,” I wanted to say
For the compromises you made, for our relationship
For the infinite love you showered on me
For the sleepless nights you spent for me
But I was distraught, and maybe I was lost
But I always found you, right beside me,
No questions asked, no judgments passed,
Unconditional support, you always offered me
And for all those times, when I wished to thank
But assumed you understood how grateful I am
And words of gratitude never reached my lips
I am sincerely remorseful and apologetic
Indebted to you I stand today
To you, I owe all my glory,
So I now bow my head and say,
“Please forgive me, I’m truly sorry.”
©Vandana Bhasin
02.04.2021
I wrote a letter, in a similar vein, to my parents when I was 21!
Wow! That’s so sweet and kind of you. 21 is the age when we generally think that what our parents did for us is kinda their duty but if you could write a ‘thank you’ note then, then I’m sure your parents must have been delighted 🙂
There were more apologies than thanks!
How beautiful this is!!
Thanks Pragalbha! It’s important to show
love and care 🙂
You are welcome. Yes 🙂