ALS NaPoWriMo Day 24 Prompt:
A human’s heart is an ocean of secrets. No matter how close relationships we have, we still have some secrets. How about sharing those secrets today? I know, a secret shared with one is no more a secret. So maybe you could write about the secret of keeping a secret. Whatever it may be, we are eagerly awaiting to know about your secrets today
I have a followed a self-created pattern in the all verses of the poem above. Hope it doesn’t already exist. If it does, please apprise me.
I’m calling this form “Pentorama” as I am planning to write more of these. Please feel free to follow the pattern for your poems with due credit
First two lines are vivid description of the subject.
Third line is negative or not-so-good traits of the subject.
Fourth line is positive traits of the subject.
Fifth line discloses the name of the subject.
Poem: Celestial Secrets (A Pentorama)
The golden orb of light that never fails to shine
The crimson bedazzles in the expanse of blue skies
Fierce, gigantic, indiscernible
Yet glistening, nourishing, revitalizing
I wonder the secret of unvanquished Sun
The glitterati that embellishes the sky as bride
Quietly extenuating the murkiness of night
Distant, massive, capricious
Yet omnipresent, iridescent, ethereal
I wonder the secret of luminescent stars
Aboding millions of galaxies, planets and stars
Creating atoms, energy, frequency in astral
Incomprehensible, enigmatic, phenomenal
Yet sacrosanct, evolving, abundant
I wonder the secret of mystical Universe
Infinite emotions emerge and elapse
A connection of mind, body, soul and universe
Insatiable, irrational, impulsive
Yet affectionate, passionate, compassionate
I wonder the secret of magnanimity of heart
©Vandana Bhasin
24.04.2023