Tanka: Christmas

21 Dec

Tanka: Christmas

hearts gleaming with joy

mind rejoicing vacations

cakes, gifts and goodies

Aha, Christmas time is here

I hope Santa heard my prayers!

Linked to Weekly Tanka Challenge #76 hosted by Elsie of Ramblingsofawriter where keeping in view the spirit of Christmas, she has asked us to use prompt words “Christmas” and “Joy” in our Tanka this time.

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Comments ( 11 )

Sudhir Chauhan / 21 Dec 2017

beautiful lines…….

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- Feelings and Freedom / 22 Dec 2017
  
  Thanks Sudhir!
  
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boundlessblessingsblog / 21 Dec 2017

Hahaha so cute Vandana and he has surely heard these beautiful lines and such a cute Santa with little dainty specs which is suiting him so well. Great poem

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- Feelings and Freedom / 22 Dec 2017
  
  Thanks Kamal. The Santa in the pic is indeed so cute
  
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  - boundlessblessingsblog / 22 Dec 2017
    
    Welcome Vandana and yes a little darling.
    
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kiwinana / 21 Dec 2017

Yes, perfect words for a Christmas Tanka poem, they ring the message loud and clear.
Thanks. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and a happy holiday with lots of laughter and fun.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 22 Dec 2017
  
  Thanks dear Elsie! Merry Christmas to you and your family too!
  
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Ξnigma / 23 Dec 2017

Beautifully written.

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- Feelings and Freedom / 23 Dec 2017
  
  Thank you so much. Have a great weekend!
  
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  - Ξnigma / 23 Dec 2017
    
    You’re welcome.
    Thank you. You too have a great weekend.
    
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